Friday, July 15, 2011

Camp Cheerio: BYU's New Recruits

Another Camp Cheerio segment showing four college boys from BYU getting sent to the camp for breaking the honor code. Story is from a third-person, past tense point of view, focuses a little more on "Daisy" than the other "girls", so it's a little different formatting-wise than the other Camp Cheerio parts I've done, but this is what felt right and I thought it turned out pretty well. Tell me what you think (of this specific set of captions and the Camp Cheerio series as a whole) in the comment section below. Thanks!

1 comment:

  1. Great series, as with many of your captions, I wish that they were true I and I could attend :)