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Wednesday, January 7, 2015

All They Notice

Regular caps on the way for the next few days. The Sissy Caption Contest has some excellent submissions and I hope to post them all late Friday/early Saturday so if you want to enter try to do so before then!

This was a fun cap for me to write. I loved the way the forced femme aspect melds with youthful ignorance, as well as how both interact with the nice image. Hope you all enjoy it as well!


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  1. Sometimes I feel the same way when making captions. I'll whip up some sort of devious trap or plot twist that I don't think that has ever been done before, and its a bunch of, "yawns!" while the generic captions that you feel like you've seen a million times will get the, "AWESOME! GREAT JOB!" replies. Then I am like, "but I used recursion and transitive logic on the first caption and you like that one better?" and the reply is something around, "but blond hair and boobies!"

    So anyway, I wanted to say, "AWESOME! GREAT JOB! Blond hair and boobies!" because its funny, smart and BOOBIES!

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    1. Well thank you Dee - I'm glad this cap managed to show off literary as well as aesthetic eyecandy :) It's often a struggle trying to balance clever writing with an image that won't drown the text with sexiness, or at least do it in a way that people enjoy both aspects. Perhaps it's wishful thinking, but I hope people do come for the blonds and boobies but stay for the inventive stories. Glad to see you are at least one of those people who appreciates this :)

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  2. Haha Dee is spot on. I have a series where the last cap has three times as many views as the first one and I'm sure it's because the model has bigger boobies. The story wouldn't have even made sense to two thirds of these readers...

    Anyway glad to see Elena is giving them what they deserve :) I like this cap a lot. Stories from the POV of the antagonist aren't that common so this one feels really different and fun...and the picture is nice...BOOBIES!

    Zoli

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    1. Thanks Zoli - I appreciate that you looked past the boobies to see another big part of this cap, even though I will admit that I quite enjoy focusing on the image as well :) I think it's interesting to write from an antagonist perspective because it's much easier to highlight control and dominance over the feminized subject while making the reader experience the transformation as if they are watching it as opposed to feeling it happen to themselves. Not that the other method isn't nice, but sometimes it's just nice to see things that way...and stare...mmmm...boobies...

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